Aristotle and Adrienne Kress

"Character gives us qualities, but it is in actions - what we do - that we are happy or the reverse...All human happiness and misery take the form of action"

-Aristotle

I thought it was particularly relevant to writing and to what I am working on right now. Way to be  insightful, Aristotle. On Another Note...


I finally found, at the library, Adrienne Kress's second book, Timothy and the Dragon's Gate. I like it slightly less than Alex and the Ironic Gentleman. I'm not sure why I like it less, but I still really like it a lot, and haven't been able to put it down since I picked it up today. Adrienne Kress is a talented writer and her silliness is immeasurable (is anyone's?).

From what I've read about her, she has extensive theater experience and I would really like to read a book less focused on helicopters and computers and more about theater. The scene in the theater in Timothy and the Dragon's Gate is spectacular and she brings that part of her world to life in a tremendous way. Some other settings in the book lack that same spark she gives to the theater.

Her characters, on the other hand, have all the spark and life they need, and then some. As farfetched as some of the characters can be, she makes them feel real and alive in ways many authors struggle with. I think her strange and interesting characters are her greatest strength and what makes her books such a pleasure to read.

I would recommend this book to both kids and adults because adults need a little whimsy in their lives just as much as children. Adrienne Kress, I commend you on your fantastic and unique imagination!

Writers Block: Waiting for Inspiration to Strike vs. Striking Inspiration

My Work-In-Progress should have about 4,000 more words than it does, but I skipped two days in a row. Why? I could blame it on writer's block, but lets lay the blame where it belongs: laziness. Rather than face the challenge before me (a gaping hole in the plot and a scene that required that hole be patched before proceeding), I simply took a break and thought "inspiration will come."

Well, it didn't. What came instead was a desire to write, though I had nothing in my head to write about. I opened my file and expected to stare at a blank screen. I re-read what I wrote two days before until it dawned on me. I remembered a minor character and had him patch the hole for me.

As ideas go, good ones are hard to come by, and waiting for inspiration to strike is not enough. Waiting out writer's block is like the stork of Bad Ideas. It will come to you in the middle of the night bearing in its beak a half-formed thought that seems decent at first, but doesn't actually make sense. These sudden bursts of inspiration will not fill your plot holes. Their only purpose is to wake your spouse when you turn on the light to jot them down in your journal entitled "Ideas I will never use." I'm not sure if this technique works for anyone, and if it does, feel free to rant in the comments, but I just can't sit around and take extended breaks from my WIP while I wait for an inspiration. Inspiration just doesn't work like that.

When I walk away from my novel feeling stuck, I may get an idea. That idea may be about my book, or it may be an idea for an entirely different book. I can't count how many half-written manuscripts I've abandoned because when I felt stuck, an inspiration struck me and I cheated on my WIP with an unrelated project (usually one that was not as good as the original).

The best ideas are formed during the writing process, in my experience, as I am fleshing out characters. They come from ignoring the writer's block and having a random character pop open a door and say hello. From skipping scenes and writing the ending, and from simply powering through the scene at hand and seeing where I end up.

When I started writing my current Work-In-Progress, Allister Blacknall was nothing more than an evil warlock seeking fortune. He was the driving force for the story, but he just didn't make sense. It was frustrating and I could have given up many times. But while I wrote, he developed into a murderous ex-government spy turned fugitive, seeking not riches but arcane knowledge, and a means to escape his inevitable capture. His character has spawned two other sub-villains, and a host of supporting characters to fill the driving force roles.

None of this happened while waiting for inspiration to strike, but while I was striking inspiration. I hope that next time I decide to take a day off, I re-read this and smack myself. That is certainly *striking* inspiration ba dum pshhh!

(.....Sorry)

Writing my novel, word counts and summary

I've been working on my novel's rough draft and I'm quite pleased to say that I finished Part One! It is 18k words so far, but I will edit that down a bit. I'm aiming for 60k total, so part one of four should really be no more than 15k. I guess I just have a tendency to run away with words when I am excited. And I am very excited about this book!

In the many books I've started in the past, the characters were interesting, but the plots were as thin and transparent as water, and they trailed off and died in the middle of nowhere. I simply could not resurrect them. It was tragic, yes, but they are in a better place (unfinished manuscript heaven, of course) and I grieved and moved on. I believe this one is thick and creamy as milk, and is contained in a pretty glass pitcher so it wont be trailing off and going nowhere like my other ones, may they rest in peace.

This novel will be finished. At the very least, I will finish the rough draft. I've restricted my editing until I finished the first part, because I'm afraid I will be discouraged. Today, though, I edited some of Part One, removed a lot of useless things, and I feel good about it.

I've been trying to think of a one-sentence summary to describe the book. The best I've come up with so far is here:

"It's a middle grade fantasy about a budding sorcerer, and his struggle to free an important family from the mind controlling effects of a warlock determined to learn their ancient magical secrets at any cost."

That's probably more like three sentences crammed into one, but like I said: It's a work in progress!